Good web site - just enough information to get someones attention! Good job. On your page My Story at the bottom of the page you left some of the pre-formatted text - no big problem!

I'm at a loss on what format do we use. How do you enter a phrase? Between the phrase do you use a comma to separate the terms?

Great try! It's always amazing how different everyone presents the information - you did a good job. Some suggestion, instead of opportunity 1 & 2 put names on them - that way people know what they are clicking on. Make your links clickable. Get your movies working. One thing I want to add is that you write well - maybe you could start writing copy for others websites (I am very week in this area)!

I really like your website! It is short, sweet, and to the point. Someone looking for a business opportunity would definitely click your links. Colors are good; it is easy to read. One short minor suggestion - since your website title starts with e-currency that should be first on the list. Put GDI second. Great site!

Good website - however your video takes too long to load. If you are trying to advertise your marketing efforts change the video to promoting your businesses instead of a bio. Most prospects aren't interest in listening to your bio - they want to quickly learn how you are making money. Maybe change the video to a second page so if the prospect wants to listen to your bio they can go there and do so. Write some killer copy so that the first paragraph grabs their attention and makes them want to read and explore the rest of the site. Remember in order to catch their attention you have to solve one of their problems, prove to them that they can make money, or/and give them valuable information. I do think you did a great job on your first job - now get a book on html and make it better. It is a continuous, evolving process. As a added hint you only have four seconds to grab your prospects attention - if you do not grab their attention they will move on to the next page.

Good job on your bio, but it is boring (sorry). Your first page should be something that makes the surfer explore the rest of the site - make it catch their attention. Put the bio on another page so if they really want to learn about you they can. Most surfers don't want to read the bios - they want to know how to make money, get something for free, or solve their problems. Think outside the box and wow them. On average you have only four seconds to grab their attention. My web page is just in the first stages - so you are way ahead of me - good luck in all you do.