I was reading the GDI made easy page yesterday and email proposals caught my eye and I read
thru all of them and decided to write my own after reviewing those on the GDI made easy site.
Below is what i came up with. Any feed back would be gratefully appreciated.
(the first line refers to the GDI email address that the recipient will see (your .ws email address))
Take a look up thare at my e-mail address its unique isnt it?
Would you like to have an e-mail address or any other website
with your own specific personal uniqueness? Perhaps Your own
Damain Name? EXample:
David@Wilson.__ or
http://wilson.__/wilson My name is David Wilson Jr. You're recieving this message
from me personally (1.) because you're Friends or (2.) because
you're family. This buisness that im in is not MLM or Network
marketing. This buisness that im in is not even chain letters.
Although it would seem so. Just Remember it is not. This is
a cleaner mail letter, which means one thing: and that is to
send all my friends and family the invitation first thing.
That being said we'll move on. I first want to invite you
into an opportunity to earn an income hence:(doing what it
is that im am now doing) While we sleep, play, ride horses,
and/or any other hobby or event that is taking place in our
lives at the spur of the moment. Get it! Earn an income While
we are sleeping!
Now in my initial invitation letter I send a Cleaner E-mail
Letter. And that means that "this correspondence is not an
auto-responder" Importantly this is the only time that I
will type this message and send it to my Friends and/or
Family PERIOD. And that also means that you wont need to send
any technically difficult "opt-out" e-mail to be opted-out of
a program that you dont want to be in.
Point Two: If you dont want to be part of this opportunity to
earn a substantial amount of income "For Life" I repeat "For Life"
Then you dont have to do anything but just delete this message
from you email inbox and I'll never contact you again; Execept
for personal matters and Friends and Family get-togethers and
stuff. You know! hill-billy stuff
My personal feelings about this program is really strong. It is
all I am going to hint to you about the program. But if you feel
a strong need to be involved then I will set you up! I will Hook
You Up, Friend. I'm so Excited that I got involved; it's
contagious. I started in Jan. 2007 and i'm still new to the scene
"its contagious" i'm always learning in a user-friendly invironment.
This program has a great user-friendly dash-board and the back-office
is loaded with secrets from people who are genuinely availible to
help you, As well as a very large library of tools to help you along
the way. Any time you need help,just Instant message them (or Me) and
you'll get a quick and prompt response.
Lastly, I will be your personal sponsor and mentor, I'm there
in a pinch, and I'm just a phone call away.
Remember: If you want to be involved Hit your Reply button saying
"Let me in, David before I stay broke all my life" and I'll set you
Up! I will Hook You Up, Friend PERIOD!
If You Decide to stay broke all your life and not earn an "Income
For Life" then: do nothing and i will not contact you ever again
about this buisness. Although that doesnt cut our ties as Family or
Friendship. Thank you for your time.
You can have everything you want
in life as long as you help enough
other people get what they want