Hi to everyone,
I'm really, really new at this, and thus far a bust! Here's the story so far...
phase1: At first, I used the random replicated site with my domain... I emailed everyone I knew with a note and the link... got a big fat zero!
phse2: I've just completed my first ever custom page (with my own logo) www.myturn.ws, Ive registered with a dozen or so social sites and am currently just making friends.
phase3: before I start promoting to my new friends, I ask that you the .ws community please give my site a serious critique... I need your help, I believe that this GDI product will indeed provide me a great income (if only I can get it off the ground)
Please help me! I'm asking for your opinion and advise ...my upline has completely ignored me! Not even one response to my request for help. I did get a couple of automated emails, but no response to any of my questions
Kind regards,
DannyB
www.myturn.ws
I'm really, really new at this, and thus far a bust! Here's the story so far...
phase1: At first, I used the random replicated site with my domain... I emailed everyone I knew with a note and the link... got a big fat zero!
phse2: I've just completed my first ever custom page (with my own logo) www.myturn.ws, Ive registered with a dozen or so social sites and am currently just making friends.
phase3: before I start promoting to my new friends, I ask that you the .ws community please give my site a serious critique... I need your help, I believe that this GDI product will indeed provide me a great income (if only I can get it off the ground)
Please help me! I'm asking for your opinion and advise ...my upline has completely ignored me! Not even one response to my request for help. I did get a couple of automated emails, but no response to any of my questions
Kind regards,
DannyB
www.myturn.ws
Hello Danny,
Visually, your site looks good. I would change the word "expense" to "investment." That's just a more positive way to presenting the program. Elmer Wheeler wrote a sales book many years ago in which he said, "Don't sell the steak - sell the sizzle!" That makes a lot of sense. People want to know what the business can do for them. You mention some things that I don't have to do, but you don't tell me what I will receive for my $10 investment. It would be good to mention some of the benefits of the product AND the incredible opportunity to build residual wealth. Use bullet points without making it too wordy.
I understand what you mean regarding lack of upline support. Been there - done that! It's no fun and it's hard to build the business by yourself, but it can be done. You have to be the person you would like for your upline to be. Stay motivated and keep-on-keeping-on!
To your success,
Dan Lillpop